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Little Man

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I smell his tainted scent, so putrid and delicious—
Where are you, little man? I know you hide!
Give me his blood and bones—the bread will be nutritious;

My gold counts me to slumber, so dusted and propitious,
But where is the last? Little man, dare I see illusions on the side?
I smell his tainted scent, so putrid and delicious—

My fowl lays wealth until I sleep, so tempting and ambitious,
Little man, all I have are feathers! What have you tried?
Give me his blood and bones—the bread will be nutritious;

My harp plays before I sleep, so careful and capricious
But oh ho, little man! My harp has painfully cried!
I smell his tainted scent, so putrid and delicious—

I found the running devil, so cunning and seditious
Little man! The time has come! I can taste you with my bride!
Give me his blood and bones—the bread will be nutritious;

Stalks of rancid green, must you be so broken and malicious?
I’ll get you yet, little man, across the river wide;
I smell his tainted scent, so putrid and delicious—
Give me his blood and bones—the bread will be nutritious.
For the Villainous Villanelles Contest hosted by *PoetryPlease.

I liked the idea of the giant from Jack and the Beanstalk. My inspiration spurred from the giant’s words when he enters his house:

“ Fee-fi-fo-fum,
I smell the blood of an Englishman,
Be he alive, or be he dead,
I'll have his bones to grind my bread.”
One thing that I feel like I should explain are the words “the river wide” because it’s probably a little confusing. It’s an allusion to the River of Styx. Yes, I love my Greek mythical allusions. ^^; But I thought it’d be nice to end with a curse that leads on to the afterlife. I couldn’t just kill the giant and leave it at that. It wouldn’t entirely fit with the theme. Not in my mind at least.

Story: Jack and the Beanstalk

Enjoy! ^^
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This is amazing!